Je continues à mettre ce que j'écris en ce moment, encore en anglais. Si quelqu'un vois des fautes dites-les moi ! C'est un entraînement !
oOo..Dead Melody..oOo
I’m wasting my time, In this cruel world
All problems are mine, When I feel so cold
My body is living, With my dead spirit
I’m really nothing, I can’t control it
I remember she says that everything will be okay
But with these words, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
I have try to feel good and to fight against the pain
But with this desire, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
I’m wasting my life, In this cruel mind
All the things I’ve hide aren’t worthwhile
For everyone who have been living in the usa
Coz’ we have been brought up in stranges ways
I remember she says that everything will be okay
But with these words, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
I have try to feel good and to fight against the pain
But with this desire, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
No one is able to understand, why I feel so lost
It’s not worth fighting against the sorrow
Because in my clean hands, the world is worst
Than you can imagine, coz’ you don’t wanna go
These words, in my mind
Are my dead melody
oOo..Dead Melody..oOo
I’m wasting my time, In this cruel world
All problems are mine, When I feel so cold
My body is living, With my dead spirit
I’m really nothing, I can’t control it
I remember she says that everything will be okay
But with these words, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
I have try to feel good and to fight against the pain
But with this desire, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
I’m wasting my life, In this cruel mind
All the things I’ve hide aren’t worthwhile
For everyone who have been living in the usa
Coz’ we have been brought up in stranges ways
I remember she says that everything will be okay
But with these words, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
I have try to feel good and to fight against the pain
But with this desire, in my mind
There’s only a dead melody
No one is able to understand, why I feel so lost
It’s not worth fighting against the sorrow
Because in my clean hands, the world is worst
Than you can imagine, coz’ you don’t wanna go
These words, in my mind
Are my dead melody
Commentaires
Par Gali le 06/08/2005 à 10h36
Si il est sympa le texte. l'angliciste sur le retour pr les fautes ya juste "everyone have been livING" voilà choupy c tout
gros bisous
félicitations
Par Nadège le 29/07/2005 à 13h32
Mdr Elise ! En tout cas ce texte est mieux que le dernier en anglais je trouve, il est plus recherché et bien écrit, pour les fautes je sais pas trop !
Par miss flo le 29/07/2005 à 02h05
J'ai lu ton texte avant les autres hihi^^,et pour te dire j'en ai eu la chair de poule,j'aime vraimlent beaucoup ta façon d'écrire,ta facilité de sortir des pensées aussi réalistes.
Pour tout ça,j'ai hâte que votre rêve se réalise,je suis ta première fan et tu le sais (^_^)
Continues de passer de telles émotions à tes fans qui se font de plus en plus nombreux(tu les entends crier?!? Corrocksssssssssssssss Corrockkkkkkksssssss I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,you ... the best ^^)
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